Thursday, March 29, 2018

[the poem is judged] of embellish wet nib decide force -- Shi Youzhu bead poetry " quiet force " review analyse (2360 words) . . .







 

 

A few days ago, shi Youzhu bead published make newly " quiet force " , I began to look, did not find a sense. The likelihood is the intention that did not understand a poet. To facilitate study and think, I have a habit, always be interested or the thing that oneself did not figure out temporarily always likes to be written down. This poetry is not exceptional also, I duplicate it to computer desktop, can see at any time.

 

Bead bead it is the 2nd adds my good friend poet after I join Chinese essay network, real name Li Feiming, she is a beautiful English teacher that comes from Sichuan. Began to publish work 2011, more than 100 poetry, essay is in " Chinese essay net " , " entrepreneur daily " wait for media print to go out. It is now " Chinese essay net " member, install area writer academician greatly from tribute. In the contact of a few months, read her major work, sensory bead bead very assiduous, have literary strength again, not only work is full of new idea, and with post comment on the intention, reach the designated position. Publish work every time, dou Youzhu bead wonderful and abound of passion comment on, from touch very much for the heart. Early wants to be bead bead write a poem to judge, just do not have time all the time, so, postpone again and again.

 

Today, take out time eventually, read again bead bead " quiet force " . I open poetry to study one time seriously, feel above all " quiet force " the name is very familiar ah. optional Baidu, ah! The most fetching is entering an intent by [beautiful] Pi Ke? Ye Er (Pico Iyer) of compose " quiet force " books. Be in " quiet force " in one book, pi Ke? Ye Er shared a lot of point of views that with us commonsensible photograph is contrary to. He thinks everybody is in in one's heart, need to take white space actually, a halt, had pause ability to let a person produce resonance just about like a paragraph of music. But, this book is not contemplative instructor, also not be booklet of religious conduct propaganda, advocated a kind of lifestyle however, put out computer namely, cast a mobile phone, escape city is blatant, pass long sit quietly, enter inner world.

Besides, still a lot of is concern " quiet force " entry, it is to blot out the sky and cover up the earth really, the explanation is numerous. I think, the title that the poet dares to use such reverberate like thunder actually writes a poem, courage is quite big really, can its show spot? As a result of curiosity, each paragraphs when read poetry carefully, each, each word, consider seriously. Immediately, feel side of stroke of a cool breeze, that language nature is fluent, poetic flavour is abundant, meaning accumulate plentiful; That affection is true and euphemistic, complex is full-bodied; 4 brief poems and songs, let me shut eye static heart actually, if the dream roams.

 

Although, get in the world of numerous and complicated quiet it is a kind of excessive is begged, but, the poet is adjusted through ego however still attainable a quiet and beautiful. This kind of quiet and beautiful, not distant, it is in oneself assurance. When " cover the body in those are noisy / emerge to the side of the lip / emerge to finger tip " always, whether can our heart still exercise restraint. This is a kind of high quality accomplishment apparently, although be in very in noisy environment, also can maintain a kind of quiet state of mind. Because, quiet can make popular feeling static, also can make the person experiences a kind of halcyon happiness. Face the life, what only quiet ability makes a person fine savor a life finely is abundant, and the pursuit to good future work with perseverance and passion!

 

Original, qiu Yeliang lonely, when lamp extinguish snore rises, still have however noisy hang in branch; In the heart difficult static, nocturnal difficult Mian when, take book, static heart is read, study charges. Little forgot apply colours to a drawing, slowly " plump and smooth-skinned language is hanged full the tip of a tree " , knowledge and oneself are one case, swing to the top of one's bent in brimless ocean swim. For a short while deserted heart, get feeling relieved actually; A dreariness, helpless night becomes wet, warm, even, one walks out of loneliness, the poetic rain instant that is full of a hope " shed have diarrhoea to be before the window " , there is moon on rainwater, get rid of is appeared to wear in moon direction.

 

"Xu Piao of happy Xu of a buddhist comes / lasting ooze embellish " . Tone is penetrable the body, mind flushs a Qing Dynasty flows. The poet indicates " buddhist is happy " , the musician that is Chinese ancient time people, according to archaic a Buddhist monk people writes in the life philosophic theory that card of the place in daily life gets poetry, a kind of traditional Gu Le that undertake music music is sung and forms. In reality. The main effect with happy buddhist is to give a person to reduce trouble, bring quiet heart, auditor lets realize life ways of life in the body in music over the foundation hereat. The poet is here the implied meaning more should be static idea is taken an examination of, ceaseless introspection, find inadequacy. Then, "Na Lesheng, rise from tiptoe " , a kind of thoroughly remould oneself, the feeling that look brand-new " had overflowed ear / permeate the skin " , cover the whole body, red-blooded.

 

Quiet how to become force? Poet " a quiet force / garrulous garrulous murmur / active heart and blood " line, be just as "Water constantly dripping wears holes in stone" , a water, wen Wan and blandly falls from brim drippy, it is full of force, low-key however inside collect, the block puncture that can issue brim however. The heart with gentle and quiet individual character is a boundless, having Still waters run deep.Calm and sturdy. This dares namely " put down " , brave " precipitation " , do all one can " promotion " , forever " firm " . Put down computer, put down bagatelle, put down brawl, put down trouble, go sleep deeply, go Jing Sai, -- at this moment you, whether can feel quiet rise sadly, putting down the world also is a kind of abundant enjoyment so. Have the person of place oneself Yu Anjing only, ability is had quite quiet become hold to, firm, down to seeks a time, look for oneself, "Cut is worn the sentence of full dance of be high up in the air " , "Return / halcyon and abundant already was filled with in the heart be filled with rise " , become powerful state of mind and force.

 

Poetry is sent carefreely far, by numerous enter brief, simple sense plentiful, cause resonance easily. A poetry that I remember myself " if be remained only,have " , so, what we discuss today is " if be remained only quiet " , how to meet? Remain only in the heart quiet, and this quiet force whether can the blue sky that enough maintains a bounty, let oneself live quietly auspicious?

Also resemble Pi Ke? Ye Er " quiet force " the place in the book is told " they are good at the edges and corners in repair heart and branches and tendrils, inside collect is gentle and low-key, condescending. The force of these glaring character brightness, interweaving another quiet dimension is spent -- human Qing Dynasty brief and pure. " in the world in this rapid change, dazzling, rich and colorful, those who maintain a heart is quiet be a dearer thing really.

Accordingly, we are faced with very acid test: Before flour made from various kinds of beans of involute, noisy, no matter be to encounter the rainbow after be like rain or great waves torrent, after rein in footstep " sober " it is a kind of attitude not just, it is a kind of accomplishment more. Search quiet, no matter adopted kind is shutting oneself up and ponder over one's mistakes still is remote mountains cultivate oneself according to a religious doctrine, not be completely cut off at the world, however more of individual of press close to comprehend. So, "Quiet " it is a kind of lifestyle not just, it is the clinging enterprising after a kind of precipitation, promotion more.

 

From the poet bead bead poetry " quiet force " in, sunshine realizes gave a few reasons: We should learn to be far from -- extricate oneself leaves convention, raise sexual cultivate one's morality; We should learn Jing Sai -- often meditate, make up for short board; We should learn to be read greatly -- put oneself to the most rock-bottom precipitation, the foundation starts, ceaseless promotion; We should learn self-improvement -- hold to tough, low-key act vigorously is entered. Only such, ability is in quite " dormancy " in self check; Be in " blind area " in precipitation, in " add fire " in forging, in " take off change " in promotion.

Today, sunshine and everybody share poetic bead bead make newly " quiet force " . The biggest gains is she tells us quiet wisdom: Cast powerful inner world only, poetry ability facile and graceful of the poet freelies, rosy clouds is all over the sky. No matter be blatant and buckish, deep stillPeacefulLonely, quiet calm force, the pure beauty of inner Qing Dynasty that always can invite oneself, the way that allows oneself to create is full of brightness.

(sunshine soft sword is written at Qingdao, on November 29, 2017)

 

 

Accessory: Original work

Quiet force

Http://www.cnprose.com/portal.php of Chinese essay net? Mod=view&aid=10017

Author: Bead

 

The sound with silent posse

Bit by bit erode

Cover the body in those are noisy

Emerge to the side of the lip

Emerge to finger tip

 

The apply colours to a drawing of an autumn night

An attraction

For a short while

Plump and smooth-skinned language is hanged full the tip of a tree

Shed have diarrhoea to be before the window

 

Xu Piao comes to one Qu Chanle Xu

Persistent ooze embellish

Na Lesheng, rise from tiptoe

Had overflowed ear

Permeate the skin

 

A quiet force

Garrulous garrulous murmur

active heart and blood

Have a voice

Cut is worn the sentence of full dance of be high up in the air

Return

Halcyon and abundant already was filled with in the heart be filled with rise

 

 [author brief introduction]

Zhu Huabing, pseudonym: Sunshine soft sword, person of city of Shandong a surname, hold post He lustre municipal government mechanism, qingdao of the permanent after retiring.

It is now " China essay net creates committee " vice-chairman, "Chinese essay net " engage by special arrangement reads and edit, culture of Chinese poetry society, China academician of poetry of youth of China of justice labor federation, vice-chairman of association of writer of youth of He lustre city, " big dictionary of Chinese contemporary poetry " and " China is latter-day masterpiece of a person of academic or artistic distinction of hundred years Parnassus " the first subeditor, " poetic China " poetic publication chief editor.

1979, attended twice to fight to jumping over defend oneself to strike back 1984 (central the Central Military Commission awards " person thrust deep into the enemy forces of the Yinshan Mountains fights battalion of Merit Citation official " -- one of battalion commanders) , for many times make contributions be rewarded.

Will love literary creative work all the time for years. Individual poem article comes loose see at " People's Daily " " the liberation army signs up for " " Chinese essay net " " Chinese poetry net " " Yunnan daily " " Shandong literature " " times literature " " children literature " wait for of all kinds media more than 1000 (head) . Partial poetry, essay is collected respectively at " 2015 " China affection " countrywide poetry essay is chosen " , 2017 " the 3rd year " China affection " countrywide poetry essay is chosen " " new century free verse written in a vernacular is in charge of " " of poet of contemporary actual strength rise abruptly " " classical versicle · is contemporary phalanx " the book such as large peotry anthology, and for many times bear the palm, have the honor to win the 2nd among them " Xin cloud cup " countrywide literature large award surpasses poetry kind first prize, 1- - 3 organizations award, have the honor to win a network " vanward poet " title. Have the honor to win: 2015 " Chinese affection " first prize of league matches of countrywide poetry, essay; 2017 the 3rd " Chinese affection " the award such as gold of league matches of countrywide poetry, essay. In recent years chief editor " extract of work of Chinese contemporary literature 2015 " , " extract of Chinese contemporary poetry 2015 " , " Qing Qing child anthology of contemporary love of Jin · China " , " autograph of sweet · of Wen Yun shedding makes an appointment with author writing year anthology 2016 " , " clump of 9 pages article " large literature a series of books " assemble of style of writing " (subeditor) , " big dictionary of Chinese contemporary poetry " and " China is latter-day masterpiece of a person of academic or artistic distinction of hundred years Parnassus " (the first subeditor) , collect articles into a volume is published " billow cleans out sand -- outstanding author writing chooses the literary world of new century network " (subeditor) wait for literary book more than 10, and " literature of sunshine affection cereal " net print 54 period. Publication individual peotry anthology " that watery eyes " . Edit early or late in last few years publish, express a character 400 more than word.

   Poetic view: Know terrestrial sufferings, return life source: Raise China healthy atmosphere, poem of chant heart charm.

 






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