Write a composition for the first time. Cheng Ruming -- " fleeting time broken shadow. 21 " 1958, the elementary school on me 3 grade, the teacher lets us write a composition, exhort: Want serious, want to had been written, write some more beautiful. What is good? What is beautiful? Come home, I attend press, on the book, father uses red stroke " bar bar " expressions, copy text. Because father has said, always important, good, he can use red pen, delimit " bar bar " . For instance: The person has many bold, the ground has much high yield! Big temper with fire is steely, everybody has duty! Dig the ground 8 feet catch mouse, fly mosquito is hit together! Put a rocket to hit spadger, 5 years in exceed England! ... At last, below pillow of my general father, small, also search, use father red pen, if regular script is written, copy text to go up -- Countryside, village village refine is steely, what refine goes out is waste residue more. Domestic home breaks his pot, go " have a dining room " . Land uncultivated land, the factory coverts shutdown, coxcombical wind be current... I " write " good composition, give teacher, await Laoshi to praise. The following day, I classes are over come home, see some are unusual in the home: Father is in parlor, wall of low head, look out, smoke persistently. Mother, expression dignified, the station kisses in father beside. Equestrian teacher, also be in our home, there is a composition in her hand this. See I come in, one pulls me in the bosom, will make text version, a place of strategic importance gives father, say: "Obviously academic, obedient, it is a good child! " saying, draw out 3 longan from the pocket, put in my hand. -- in those days, this is in northward, it is very insipid arrive. Equestrian teacher, 1959 the end of the year, the old home that returns her -- Nanning. The husband of Mr. Ma, the beginning of the year is reported, say he missays " big steel-making iron " , then, be hit into " right-wing " , commit Xinjiang. After a year, die in Yi Li. 2002, I arrive southern paint from life, go seeing Mr. Ma on a special trip. I bought 2 jins of longan, put to the front of her grave, say silently to her: Teacher, it is you, teach me to write a composition for the first time, teach me how to be an upright person, how had written, life this old essay... [carry formerly on October 21, 2008 " daily of Yu of another name for Jiangxi Province " " divine way supplement " . Responsibility edits: Zhou Yu this] |
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