Wednesday, March 28, 2018

Mid-autumn (a four-line poem with seven characters to a line and a strict tonal pattern and rhyme scheme 4)







 (one)


Hope to receive month of turn to lunar circle, pester thing of go to live in the household of one's in-laws on getting married to was not answered personally still.


The ashamed before hall the heart fills first, respect a cup of tear only already spot.


  (2)


Sweet-scented osmanthus of rice wine of cooked glutinous rice pounded into paste is sweet, moon of attack by surprise of whose dispatch dark clouds?


Always be skyline empty full moon, answer He Fang of native place month today?


  (3)


Green hill cuts off phoenix stage, do not see nocturnal month comes to Chun Jiang.


Gong Zhuying of cold rain west wind, the window is cut into parts on the west take poetic capable person.


  (4)


Illuminate without the month mid-autumn from affection, but intentional lamp two ground bright.


Flavour of character of nocturnal rain hard pass the time in a leisurely way, poetry is become Bacchic Shuang Qing.


Note: Fourth You Zhongqiu, overcast and rainy is unbroken, do not see a moon. I have a job 40 years to did not come home accompany parents to cross the Mid-autumn Festival, retired this year, have time reunion coming home, it is the sky does not have a month however, the friend also manages different land personally. This affection this scene, remember piece of line that is like empty and Li Shang concealed, can't help making Qi Ran of my heart relative.






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